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Apr 11Liked by Jojo

Poetic meter just happens to be my tiny niche of expertise, so my own posts on the topic might just interest you.

I wrote a post on “what’s so special about iambic pentameter?”, and your comments about its length are pretty much on the nose: https://williamshakespeare.quora.com/Why-Iambic-Pentameter?ch=17&oid=6241609&share=ed2e2c15&srid=LqSx&target_type=post

My comments on iambic hexameter were rather brief, and didn’t do it justice. While it’s true that a phrasal juncture between the two middle beats results in two rhythmic trimeters, this can be avoided or selectively exploited; and whereas the pentameter is more tight and dynamic, the capaciousness of the hexameter can provide an elegant unfolding to the lines (the most recent example I came across of verse in this meter was a prayer by C S Lewis).

A famous line of iambic hexameter (though I wonder how many people recognise it as such!) is the first line of Ezra Pound’s In a Station of the Metro:

The apparition of these faces in the crowd:

Petals on a wet, black bough.

There’s the light, elegant expansion of the opening line, followed by the tighter, heavier headless tetrameter (the employment of the hexameter as a variant line, to provide contrast, has a long history).

This line also exemplifies the default abstract rhythm of the hexameter: three pairs of beats. The default rhythm of the pentameter, by contrast, is that of an enlarged trimeter: three primary beats that share the intervening secondary beats between them. The impossibility of dividing the pentameter in half or into equal parts is intrinsic to its dynamic qualities.

I explain the default rhythm of the pentameter at the end of this post: https://www.quora.com/How-do-you-use-2-syllable-words-in-iambic-pentameter/answer/Keir-Fabian?ch=17&oid=305732233&share=1ce26406&srid=LqSx&target_type=answer

I provide a summary of the technical principles of iambic meter here: https://williamshakespeare.quora.com/Shakespeare-s-Rhythm-True-ease-in-writing-comes-from-art-not-chance-As-those-move-easiest-who-have-learn-d-to-da?ch=17&oid=6206614&share=3a3ae916&srid=LqSx&target_type=post

There is a level of nuance and detail in this post that even most professionals are unfamiliar with, and I also touch on variations that were specific to Shakespeare’s dramatic work (with further links). I think you might find it pretty interesting!

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Thanks for linking those posts! I think I'll find them interesting too. I'm not an expert on poetic metre myself, just a Shakespeare nerd, so some additional knowledge would be good!

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